“Is your mother the Haiti Zombie?”
“Yes.”
“Do you eat human flesh?”
“No, except my lazy-ass employees. Next question?”
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I wrote this for the Trifextra Week 39 Writing Challenge where we are required to write a 33 word composition about a zombie who was discovered in Haiti in 1937.
Your comments are appreciated.
Your comments are appreciated.
Ah, PERFECT!!! (and not the least bit scary, which I don't like)
ReplyDeletethis was a great response to the prompt, a great way to look at a POWERFUL woman.
YAY
Thank your Kir. I was tired of the spooky themes.
DeleteToo funny! Some women do eat people. Even ALIVE! Scariness! Love to see your humor.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gina. Yeah, I imagined Emiline as a pretty tough cookie.
DeleteLove this, and how it humanises the story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Karen. I wanted to get away from all the Halloween stuff, so I went with the normal (lol!) human angle.
DeleteI like how you can interpret breaking through the glass ceiling a little differently than we normally do. The humor is great as is the in-charge woman CEO. Terrific.
ReplyDeleteThanks for those comments Stephanie.
DeleteI love that her success was far more important than her Zombie mother. Funny!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I'm glad that my premise came through; she overcame many obstacles. Not to mention the zombie thing!
DeleteVery, very cool. I like it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gabriela.
DeleteWitty and snappy! I think that was brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteNice twist. The old ask a stupid question....
ReplyDeleteYeah, you go girl!
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DeleteI'd add in reporters as dessert :D
ReplyDeleteLol!
DeleteMust be one hell of a CEO to have. Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteYeah, I think she kicks ass! Thanks Varsha.
DeleteI suppose that it wouldn't do to eat the brains of the lazy employees, would it?
ReplyDeleteA witty response to the prompt! Loved it!
Only the smart lazy ones! Thank you Tina.
DeleteLove it - nicely different slant.
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace.
DeleteFinally a position she could sink her teeth into! *chomp*
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Thank you Hatch.
Deletehahaha - would have commented sooner, but I had something in my teeth - Emiline
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DeleteReally, Emmy, even though you are CEO, HR is going to crack down on your disiplinary tactics with employees.
DeleteYou always bring the funny.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lance.
DeleteFinally breaking that glass ceiling, and it's a ZOMBIE! Argh!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kymm.
DeleteI really like this take on the prompt. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Bo!
DeleteSounds like an NFL coach in a press conference. :) Great job!
ReplyDeleteExactly. She is a "take no prisoners" CEO. Thanks Mel.
DeleteHehe!
ReplyDeleteI love the idea that she knew the questions were coming, and such a pitch perfect response!
- barbara @ de rebus
That is exactly what I was trying to convey! Thank you Barbara.
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