Friday, August 17, 2012

Reunion: The End

We didn’t have the talk.  So, I still don’t have a fucking clue what Sandy’s thinking. But we have our tickets.  And she wants to do the mile high thing.  Cool fucking deal!
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I wrote this for the Trifextra Week 29 Writing Challenge where we are to write an amazing closing line to a story.  

I decided to write the ending to a previous entry called "The Reunion". 


As always, your comments are appreciated. 

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28 comments:

  1. GinaAugust 17, 2012 at 1:47 PM

    Lumdog, love the ending with crazy Sandy (but just maybe he's the nutcase) Hysterical and perfect! Wonder what happened in all those pages after she kissed him hello?

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    1. lumdog2012August 17, 2012 at 2:06 PM

      Thanks Gina. I think they are both crazy and the attraction is so great, they did a bunch of crazy things in those intervening pages! Thanks for your comments.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 17, 2012 at 2:48 PM

    you had me at mile high thing

    good work

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    1. lumdog2012August 17, 2012 at 3:20 PM

      Thanks Lance. Never tried it, but the mile high thing always struck me as odd, but funny.

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  3. AnonymousAugust 17, 2012 at 3:53 PM

    And gross. Airplane bathrooms smell worse than about anything else in the world! This was a great one.

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    1. lumdog2012August 18, 2012 at 4:23 AM

      I'm with you on the bathrooms, but I imagine these two as having strong libidos and this might be a long flight :) Thanks for your comments.

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  4. JeannaAugust 17, 2012 at 6:02 PM

    I'm with oldage on this one. Not something I want to do. Great ending though.

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    1. lumdog2012August 18, 2012 at 4:26 AM

      Thanks Jeanna. Yes, in addition to ODNT's point, the bathrooms are pretty tiny. I might hurt myself or my companion ;)

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  5. According to Mags...August 17, 2012 at 6:05 PM

    Interesting. :)

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  6. Oak Creek RanchAugust 18, 2012 at 7:56 AM

    Strongly written. Airplane bathroom... yuck. There has to be a better way to join that club.

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    1. lumdog2012August 18, 2012 at 8:21 AM

      Thanks Annette. I've heard of some bold people who use the blankets! Don't think that's my style though ;)

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  7. Marie NicoleAugust 18, 2012 at 9:18 AM

    Love the raw'ness of your writing style. Do you sometimes wonder if all the people who claim to be a full fledged member of this club are simply lying? I mean, have you seen the inside of those toilets? Are they all tiny circus acrobats?

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    1. lumdog2012August 18, 2012 at 9:28 AM

      Thanks Marie. All I can say is that my ex was a flight attendant and she saw the bathroom and the under the blanket routine. The latter being on a long night flight lol!

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  8. AnonymousAugust 18, 2012 at 10:14 AM

    Ah! Now that's a happy ending if ever there was one. :D

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  9. lumdog2012August 18, 2012 at 10:54 AM

    Haha! I hadn't thought of it that way. Thanks Linda.

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  10. AnonymousAugust 18, 2012 at 12:16 PM

    I didn't read the earlier entries but am intrigued. And the whole mile-high thing is a cute twist - not one that i want to try, but cute never the less. Joanne

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    1. lumdog2012August 18, 2012 at 12:26 PM

      I should have put a link to my earlier post, The Reunion,but I have no idea how to do that. I'm new to the blogging thing. And, I promise, I've never done the mile high thing!
      Thanks for your comments.

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  11. AnonymousAugust 18, 2012 at 4:49 PM

    Fascinating, caught my attention. Good job!

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  12. AnonymousAugust 19, 2012 at 4:01 PM

    haha, that's how i feel half the time.

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    1. lumdog2012August 19, 2012 at 4:30 PM

      Which part? Not having a clue or being happy about doing the mile high thing? :)

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  13. TrifectaAugust 19, 2012 at 10:42 PM

    Redefining the term happy ending. Thanks for the smile and for linking up. We hope to see you back tomorrow for the new challenge.

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  14. vivinfranceAugust 19, 2012 at 11:17 PM

    Not a book to give maiden Auntie Maud, but a great final sentence!

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  15. The Gal HerselfAugust 20, 2012 at 4:11 AM

    Somehow, I think that to a guy,* the combo of NOT having "the talk" and doing it on a plane is a happy ending. This made me smile.

    *And this character most definitely sounds like "a guy."

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    1. lumdog2012August 20, 2012 at 4:29 AM

      Yea, he's definitely a guy. Thanks for your comments.

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