Monday, April 8, 2013

The All Too Common Saga of a Young Marriage

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They said it wouldn’t last, but it did, for 35 years. I went to law school and you were a flight attendant. You flew to Luxembourg while I studied. On breaks, we went all over Europe. You went to med school and I started my first job. We blissfully raised three kids. As they trickled out the door, we grew apart.  We tried, I guess. Even then, for me, it was “until death do us part”, until you shut me out. I couldn’t handle the charade and made the big move. I was a fool to do your dirty work.
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I wrote this for the 100 Word Song writing prompt, which is to write 100 words inspired by Steely Dan’s song, “Dirty Work”. Ironically, this was a song my ex-wife and I loved and we first heard it while we were traveling in Germany.

Your comments are appreciated.     

5 comments:

  1. Awww. This is a nice entry. That is ironic about you and your ex-wife. I had never heard the song before this prompt, but love it now!

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    1. Thanks Donetta. I feel a little awkward about this piece as it just poured out and my attempts to polish just diluted the point.

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  2. Good you see you here, Lumdog! Nice work with the song.

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    1. Yeah, when I saw that song was the prompt, the story just wrote itself. Thanks Renee.

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  3. so relatable. There'sa a lot of emotion in what ISN"T said here. Good 100, you. thanks for playing.

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