Tuesday, July 17, 2012

The Movie



The Movie

Michele turned on the TV when he went to the bathroom.

When Mike came back into the living room, he thought: "Is this why we came back to my condo...to watch a movie on TV? He realized this was an odd thought for him; he was always polite, to a fault.

But he was pretty sure Michele wanted him to make a move, even though this was only their second date. She'd told him some cool secrets on their way to dinner, earlier that night. He had other clues.  They had really hit it off on their first date. They talked non-stop for hours and laughed a lot, and he enjoyed every minute. He was pretty sure Michele did too. And they talked a lot on the phone during the week between their dates. 

"Yea, its ok", Mike thought, “She's just killing time and she doesn’t want to be the one to make the first move.”

So there he was, a middle-aged guy, divorced after 30 years of marriage. He had hardly dated before he got married and had been faithful to his wife. His lack of experience was debilitating.  Mike thought, "What do I do now?"

Mike sat next to her in the couch and said: "Yea, I saw this movie", hoping Michele would turn it off, but she said, "I’ve seen it too, a bunch of times, it’s really funny."   Now, he was really discouraged, and he thought, "Shit, maybe I've totally mis-read the situation." They continued to watch the movie, commenting on the funny scenes.  Finally, it ended. “Ok”, he thinks, "Now’s the time."

He touched her hair. "Your hair is beautiful, it's red, right? He wasn't really sure because her hair sometimes looked more blonde than red. “Thanks, yea, I guess it’s ambiguously red." Michele said coyly.

Mike’s mind began to drift.  Michele’s hair was not really like his ex-wife's hair, which was also red, but which veered toward the copper end of the color spectrum. But now he was thinking, "God, even though her hair is a different shade of red, everybody will think I'm trying to replace my ex-wife!"

Remembering to keep the conversation going, Mike nervously said, “I like your freckles too!” Michele laughed and said, “I didn’t think they were that noticeable.”

By the time she responded, another movie started. "Noooo", he thought, "I can't let this happen."

As Michele continued to watch the screen, Mike put his arm around her, having to awkwardly squeeze between her head and the back of the couch. She turned her head toward him.  He leaned toward her and they kissed for a long time...there was no hesitation. The movie was forgotten.

I wrote this post for the current Trifecta Writing Challenge.

Comments are welcome. 

19 comments:

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  2. Very clever and amusing. BTW, you have a few typos :)

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  3. Thanks. I saw the typos after I published and being techno-impaired, I couldn't figure out how to take it back :/

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  4. Oh, I'm sure things are awkward dating again later in life. You captured that for poor Mike but he caught on.

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  5. I'm glad you noted that Mike was struggling. As I am new to blogging, I tend to be too cryptic sometimes, at the expense of getting the whole story across. Anyway, yay for Mike!

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  6. That made me laugh -- poor guy, having that awkwardness all over decades after leaving his teens. No one should have to do that more than once!

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  7. Thanks for your comment. If I were writing Chapter 2, I think he would have figured it out pretty quickly!

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  8. Hooray for second chances! I'm glad he dove in, and that they forgot the movie. This is a good story, I was thoroughly engaged.

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  9. Thank you very much. I've been enjoying your stuff too.

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  10. Nice depiction of his uncertainty. I'm with Annabelle - no one should have to go through that awkwardness twice!

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  11. I think so too. But, speaking as someone of his age group, I'm guessing that, despite the stressful situation, he might have enjoyed the adventure. Especially after all those years.

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  12. Whew. I felt awkward as he did, especially when he couldn't figure out how to get to second base. I love it that he watched an ENTIRE MOVIE without touching her because he wasn't sure what to do. Also, My husband's cousin and his wife are Mike and Michelle. Bodes well, for these two, don't you think?

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  13. Thanks for your kind words. I made up the names and but I hesitated to use them because it seemed like the double "M" thing was too cute. But, after doing my editing, I became attached to them so Mike and Michele stayed. It could bode well for your cousins-in-law unless they don't like the story. lol!

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  14. Reminds me of an episode of Louie. Awkward post-divorce, clueless, nice guy... Toughest gig in the dating world.

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  15. I think it is scary, but maybe a bit exhilarating too! Thanks for your comments.

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  16. Cameron said it...While I've never been divorced, I have dated men post divorce and you captured it so well here, even the first date stuff of not knowing how to handle this new space, these new feelings. I always say(before I married) I kiss on the first date..without a doubt, I want to know if it's worth my time, chemistry is important and stirring the pot is sometimes the best way to get there.

    that said I like these two. they are awkward and hesitant but true to their feelings, they feel very "real".

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